In the grand scheme of things you actually receive a B+ just for hard work. Exactly where you misplaced everybody ended up being on all the details. As people say, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be much more correct at this point. Having said that, let me reveal to you precisely what did work. Your authoring is certainly very powerful which is probably the reason why I am making an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, despite the fact that I can easily see a jumps in reason you make, I am not necessarily convinced of just how you seem to unite the points that help to make the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point but wish in the future you actually link your dots much better.