In the excellent pattern of things you actually get a B- just for effort and hard work. Where you actually confused everybody ended up being in your specifics. As as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more accurate here. Having said that, permit me inform you what exactly did work. The authoring is actually pretty convincing and that is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can notice the jumps in logic you make, I am not sure of how you seem to connect the details which produce the conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but hope in the future you actually connect the facts better.