Throughout this amazing pattern of things you secure a B+ just for hard work. Where you lost me was first on your details. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you just what exactly did deliver the results. Your text can be extremely engaging which is possibly the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can certainly see a leaps in reason you come up with, I am definitely not sure of just how you seem to unite your points which inturn make your conclusion. For now I shall subscribe to your issue however wish in the future you connect the dots better.