In this great design of things you'll get a B+ for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost me personally ended up being in the particulars. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you precisely what did do the job. Your text is highly convincing which is most likely the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can certainly see a leaps in logic you make, I am not really sure of how you appear to connect the details which in turn help to make the conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point but wish in the future you actually link your dots much better.