In this excellent scheme of things you'll receive a B+ with regard to effort and hard work. Where you confused me personally was first in all the particulars. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more accurate here. Having said that, let me reveal to you what did do the job. Your writing is actually very powerful which is probably the reason why I am making an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, whilst I can certainly see the leaps in reason you make, I am not necessarily confident of just how you appear to connect the details that help to make the conclusion. For now I will subscribe to your point but wish in the foreseeable future you actually link your dots much better.