Throughout the grand scheme of things you secure a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where you actually lost us ended up being in your particulars. As people say, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, permit me tell you precisely what did give good results. The writing is definitely extremely convincing and that is possibly why I am making the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can notice a leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am definitely not certain of how you seem to connect your ideas that produce the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point however trust in the near future you connect the dots much better.