In this wonderful pattern of things you get a B- for effort and hard work. Where you actually lost me personally was in your details. You know, people say, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be more correct at this point. Having said that, let me say to you what exactly did give good results. Your text is certainly pretty engaging and that is probably the reason why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, even though I can certainly notice a jumps in logic you make, I am definitely not certain of just how you appear to unite the details which inturn make your conclusion. For the moment I will subscribe to your issue but trust in the future you connect the facts much better.