In this excellent scheme of things you actually secure a B- for effort and hard work. Where you actually lost me was first on all the specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more true at this point. Having said that, let me tell you precisely what did work. Your text can be rather powerful and this is possibly why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can see the jumps in reason you make, I am definitely not sure of how you appear to unite the points which in turn make your conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however trust in the foreseeable future you actually link the dots much better.