Throughout this wonderful pattern of things you'll secure an A for effort. Where exactly you lost everybody was first in the particulars. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more correct here. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what exactly did work. Your writing is pretty persuasive and that is probably why I am making an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can easily see a jumps in reason you come up with, I am not really confident of exactly how you seem to unite the details which make your conclusion. For the moment I will yield to your position but trust in the foreseeable future you actually link the dots better.