Throughout the grand scheme of things you receive an A just for effort. Where exactly you actually lost me was on your details. As they say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more true right here. Having said that, allow me tell you what did work. Your text is definitely pretty persuasive which is probably why I am making an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can see the jumps in reason you make, I am not really sure of how you appear to unite the ideas which in turn help to make your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your point but hope in the foreseeable future you connect the facts much better.