In this awesome pattern of things you'll secure an A for effort. Where you misplaced us was first on your specifics. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more true at this point. Having said that, permit me tell you what exactly did work. Your authoring is actually rather engaging and this is possibly the reason why I am making the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can easily see a jumps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not convinced of how you seem to connect your details which inturn help to make the conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your point but hope in the future you actually link your dots much better.